You were gone too soon
Like a fleeting kiss of summer
When trees start to bloom
And there are flowers everywhere
You gifted us a moment
Of pure bliss and innocence
You were gone too soon
And with you a piece of our heart
How can we wake up in the morning
Knowing that you never will?
How can we look at the sunrise
Without remembering your smile?
You were gone too soon
A finality our tears cannot undo
Alone yet undaunted, you ventured
Into the murky unknown
Where no mortal has ever treaded
A world beyond our grasp
Do you know we love you so?
And now we will miss you
Everyday, every single day
But we will find comfort in knowing
That everytime we search the night sky
You are already one of the dazzling stars
Note: This was written for my little cousin who passed away on the 24th of August 2015.
So beautiful and touching… ♡
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Thank you, Irene. It comes from the heart. ❤
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Beautiful words to work through the grief. Truly touching. I empathize your loss. Sierra
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It came from the deepest part of my heart. Thank you, Sierra. ❤
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Poetic and beautiful
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I’m glad you like it. Thank you for the appreciation. This is for someone very dear to me. ❤
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This was very touching Mitch, I am sorry for your loss.
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I had a burst of inspiration from the pain. Thank you, Michael. The wounds will heal in time.
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Your words have touched my soul.
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It is heartwarming to know. Thank you for dropping by. 🙂
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A wonderful and heartfelt elegy to your cousin – well done, makes me think of my own cousin many years ago … thank you.
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Thank you. It’s one way to show my love to him.
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Oh, my dear, I am so sorry. Wherever he is, I’m sure your loving words have reached him. There are no barriers that love cannot defeat.
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“There are no barriers that love cannot defeat.”
Thank you for the comforting words. As what one poem says, “We shall meet again; you are only sleeping.”
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Thank you so much for liking my poem Golden Light on my blog WordMusic. I take that as a huge compliment.
Brent Kincaid
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The pleasure is mine. Have a great weekend! 🙂
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So beautifully said and a wonderful tribute.
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Thank you. Writing this helped me cope with the pain.
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Thanks for the visit and subscription 🙂
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My pleasure. I look forward to more of your writings. 🙂
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you made me read one blog and another blog until I found this. It touched my heart, you made me feel what you were feeling while writing this. You are just so wonderful and inspiring 🙂
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I draw from the pain within. I believe it is a fitting tribute to someone I hold very dear. I watched him grew up, you see. He is a brother I never have. Thank you for your beautiful words. Warms my heart. ❤
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I know the feeling when you are too attached to someone, even the thought of letting go is unimaginable.
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It is. Sometimes you just wake up and hope that everything was only a dream. There’s a part of you that can never let go. You still believe that they are there, that you can see them and touch them and hold them close to your heart. And then you realize that they are never coming back. It hurts.
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I know, I remember the feeling when my uncle just died. I was 9 yrs old then. He was so close to me, and loosing him wasn’t really easy to accept. I know the pain Mitch, I feel it. But, just remember that your dearest cousin is with Jesus Christ now and is very much free from pain. And know that time heals even the worst pains. 🙂
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“Time heals even the worst of pains.” So true. It will get better. Thank you, thank you for the comforting words. 🙂
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You are very much welcome Mitch. I’m sincerely hoping for your happiness. And remember, God won’t let you feel the pain alone. So when you feel the pain again just close your eyes and seek God, He will be there to comfort you 🙂
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❤
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keep up the self -expression. this is what heals. namaste.
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You are right. And I will. The wounds will heal in time, that’s what I keep telling myself. Thank you for dropping by and for offering comforting words. ❤
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Beautiful obituary! Very passionate, intense and incises the soul to awaken in meaning.
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I’m glad that I captured the intensity and passion. Thank you very much. I think my little cousin will be pleased with what I wrote for him. ❤
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Reblogged this on Crazy Pasta Child.
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full of feeling… touching.
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Thank you. ❤
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Thanks for the visit. The tribute was nice. From my experience losing a loved one especially at a young age hurts the most. I am truly sorry for your loss.
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It is my pleasure. Indeed. It is too painful. But life goes on for us. Thank you for your warm words. ❤
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Hey Mitch. I understand how you feel. I remember telling myself when my sister died at 10 – i was 13 then; ‘if life is so short, I better make the best of it.’
I’l pray for your cousin and for your family. Have a great day.
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I’m sorry about your sister. It must be devastating. You’re right. Life is too short and we have to make the best out of it. We can never be too certain of tomorrows. Thank you. Your words are comfort. ❤
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So sad.
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It was. It still is.
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so sad… i can feel your pain in there
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I poured my heart into it. But it will be okay, one day. ❤
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i believe so too…
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Am sorry Mitch for the loss… We share sorrows all will be good with time
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Thank you for your kind words. And you are right, it will be better in time. ❤
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Very nice poem touching to the heart.
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Thank you. ❤
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Lovely! Thanks for your visit. Hope u visit again! 🙂
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You’re welcome. Of course, I will. 🙂
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Great!
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This was a gentle punch to the stomach – so moving and it brought a certain stillness to me. Beautiful. I am so sorry for your loss. Two people very close to em passed away in the past two years, both ‘gone too soon’ at only 13 and early 40s, so this spoke to my heart.
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Thank you, Annika. I’m sorry for your loss too. It is hard but it will be better. *hugs* ❤
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So melancholic…you brought out your empathy and the sad tone through brilliance and witty prose…so sorry for your loss
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Thank you, Vincent. Your words are greatly appreciated. ❤
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I am so sorry. Beautiful and sad. My heart goes out to you.
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Thank you. It was devastating but I’m starting to feel better now. Wherever he is, I’m sure he is well. ❤
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I’m sure he is to. I’m glad to hear your getting better.
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this is so sad… beautiful… touching… yet very sad…
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I was sad when I wrote this. It still gives me the pangs of sadness from time to time. Thank you for reading and the appreciation. 🙂
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u write beautiful pieces… very raw and genuine… keep up…
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Thank you. Warms my heart. ❤
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