I stopped wondering what we are
The moment you closed the gap
Between question mark and full stop
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I stopped wondering what we are
The moment you closed the gap
Between question mark and full stop
A Haiku of eternal beauty and wisdom.
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Thank you! 🙂
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As my father reminded me after a particularly difficult breakup: We always prize our losses above our acquisitions. Strangely helpful for me back then; I hope it can be for you, if this is autobiography.
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Oh, we do, indeed. And we need reminders just like what your dad said to keep us on track. Thank you, although this one’s purely a product of my imagination. I might nees this in the future. 🙂
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🙂
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A poem doesn’t have to be long to be powerful. Another great piece, Mitch 🙂
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Thank you so much, Josh. Hope you’re doing well. Have a happy weekend! 🙂
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I love this so much. Something I’ve been feeling recently so it’s nice to see it put so beautifully into words.
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Aw, I’m glad it resonated with you. Thank you for your words of appreciation. 🙂
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Your poetry is beautiful. And yes, as Josh said, ” a poem does not have to be long to be powerful.” Those strong and still vulnerable lines speak of eternity and split seconds; of divine and human nature. I could read them for hours and still not grasp their profound meaning. I could also stare at them for a split second and immediately breath their wisdom. Those simple lines contain the universe and beyond.
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I love the way you described how you experienced this poem. Thank you, thank you. Your words made me smile. ❤️
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Your poetry made my day. Keep writing.
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Aw. I will. ❤️
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