How can it be so banal
And yet irresistible
This bizarre dance
Of uncertainty
You and me
Taking one step forward
And two steps back
Back and forth
We sway in a rhythm
No one else can hear
We are waves
Kissing the shore
Only to retreat
Gather our frayed nerves
Praying this time
It will be different
Flirting with finality
Resisting the transience
But where will it all end?
In hello or in goodbye?
Truely, loving is filled with uncertainties..😊
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Indeed. That’s why it is important to remember that we can only be certain of uncertainties. 🙂
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Transcending the Transcient
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Thank you, Steven! 😊
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Beautiful descriptive and emotive … passionately poignant! Love it! (And it’s so good to be reading you again, too. Welcome back! 🙂 )
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Thank you so much, Jonathan.
It’s good to be back and to hear from you. Blessings! 🙂
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Each new wave carries a little bit of the shore back with it; until eventually the land is no more and the water is allowed to flow freely.
It’s wonderful to ‘see’ you again! I missed reading your posts.
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Now that is a comforting thought. It is a beautiful way to look at it. Thank you, Josh. I’ve missed a lot while I’m away. I’m looking forward to catch up with you guys. It’s good to be back here. 🙂
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Hi Mitch, an amazing thoughts , .Greeting and good to hear from you.
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Thank you, Jalal. Hope you are doing well. 🙂
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Warm regards.
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Lovely post!
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Thank you! 🙂
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Just enjoy the dance will it last……..it’s rare
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Very beautifully written!!!
Check out my space also to experience the magic of letters.
Hope you will like it:)
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Thank you. I will! 🙂
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😊
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Wow, that was powerful Mitch. =) I really liked that one.
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Thank you, Susan! 🙂
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It’s perfect! I can’t do poems. 🙁
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Aw, thank you. It can be learned. 🙂
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Roses are red, violets are blue
You look like an angel, that belongs in the zoo
Is that good for a first try?
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Hahaha. That made me laugh. Not bad. Just make sure not to say that to a love interest or you will be clobbered with a club.
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There are not many pinay here. Since the pinay are the angels of God, only an angel of God could have compassion on me. The majority of people here that i have the courage to talk to are chinese or korean. Usually those nationalities have no compassion on a sinner like me. God bless you for liking my article
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Oh, I’m afraid I’m no angel. But you are very much welcome all the same. And I hope you won’t close your door on other nationalities. Every country has its own beautiful people. You might be surprised what you can learn from them. We can all learn from each other. May God bless you too. 🙂
PS May I know where you are from, if you don’t mind?
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Australia. God bless you too. I am putting a new post on my blog. Hope you like it
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