A Vignette: Void

imageHer heart is a barren land
And she writes to fill the void
With empty words about empty dreams
She is a dead star traversing the earth


15 thoughts on “A Vignette: Void

  1. unh-unh….!! Nope.. not traversing the earth.. cannot.. ah, semantics and pedantic readers 😦
    Across the galaxy perhaps, maybe across the universe (or does that remind too much of the Beatles.. ).. anyway, not across the earth.. just being pedantic 😀


    1. Across the Universe. I’m humming right now. Haha.

      Anyway, I got carried away by my imagination. Although I believe it’s not supposed to be taken so literally. I think it’s not meant to be the dead star itself traversing the earth. I will change the line to make it more suitable. And don’t worry, any comment is welcome. Even from pedants. 🙂

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